I think you did really well in your design of the newspaper, it look cool and really organize, I also like your "Western conference", because it tell people about the winning and losing of the team. I think the thing you should improve is you have a lot of text, and it may cause confuse to the reader, especially for kids.
My name is Allice ^^. And now I comment your poster : Firstly, I like your poster mostly at the Western Conference table. It looks cool! In my opinion, for basketball newspaper, that table is also the good point of the newspaper !!! Moreover, your pictures are pretty much awesome ! However, I think it would be a better newspaper if you select the lighter color, so that the readers won't feel confused while reading the information. ^^
I love your background and pictures, but try to make the pictures stand out next time.
ReplyDeleteName: Luan
ReplyDeleteI think you did really well in your design of the newspaper, it look cool and really organize, I also like your "Western conference", because it tell people about the winning and losing of the team.
I think the thing you should improve is you have a lot of text, and it may cause confuse to the reader, especially for kids.
My name is Allice ^^. And now I comment your poster :
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I like your poster mostly at the Western Conference table. It looks cool! In my opinion, for basketball newspaper, that table is also the good point of the newspaper !!! Moreover, your pictures are pretty much awesome !
However, I think it would be a better newspaper if you select the lighter color, so that the readers won't feel confused while reading the information. ^^