Explain what is diversity?
In this world there are lots of countries and cultural, in my opinion the term diversity states the differences between many people around us. Every one of us is different from each other. No matter if we are in the same country, we are unique and special. Diversity contains a lot of differences: religion, language, beliefs, appearance and personalities. Due to lot of diversity, conflicts and problems start to happen. Racism is one of it; people with different cultures don’t respect each other as well.
Explain why it is important to respect diversity?
Have you ever imagine if there are only white people in this world, how they act the same and build up same ideas… that will be very sad and boring place to live. That’s why diversity exist, it makes people easier to identify and unique from others. Therefore it is very important; we should respect it. When you work or cooperate with people from different cultural, they will have unique ideas to share with you. By that way, technology will improve quickly. Respect other cultural will bring peace and happiness to this world; throwing racism out the way and bring the love in. This world will be much a better place if every one of us respects diversity.
Grade : 11/12
ReplyDeleteI use everyday word. My sentence beginnings are vary, they show ideas connect. Every of my details add a little more to the main point. There are very few errors in my paper, it wouldn't take long to get this ready to publish.
I could improve by choosing more advance words, using colorful words.